Mark McGuinness | poetry
A notebook of poems I read, a scrapbook of poems I write
by Mark McGuinness on 3 December, 2010
The snow we saw together - has it fallen again this year?
Adapted from Haiku of Basho.
Tagged as: Basho, haiku
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Nice Mark. Like an icicle falling to powdered snow.
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A haiku comment! Thanks Dean.
peer pressure broken poetic structure simply significant
besides the point^ your words are astonishingly appealing
Heh, this is fun. Not sure it quite counts as renga though.
Indeed hence the “broken poetic structure” bit eh? I am an amateur at best with haiku. :p
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{ 5 comments… read them below or add one }
Nice Mark.
Like an icicle falling
to powdered snow.
A haiku comment! Thanks Dean.
peer pressure
broken poetic structure
simply significant
besides the point^
your words are astonishingly appealing
Heh, this is fun. Not sure it quite counts as renga though.
Indeed hence the “broken poetic structure” bit eh? I am an amateur at best with haiku. :p