Basho – Snow Haiku By Mark McGuinness 5 Comments The snow we saw together – has it fallen again this year? Adapted from Haiku of Basho.
Dean Johnson says 11 January, 2011 at 11:59 pm Nice Mark. Like an icicle falling to powdered snow. Reply
Jacob Mann says 17 January, 2011 at 9:30 am peer pressure broken poetic structure simply significant besides the point^ your words are astonishingly appealing Reply
Mark McGuinness says 17 January, 2011 at 10:13 am Heh, this is fun. Not sure it quite counts as renga though. 😉 Reply
Jacob Mann says 21 January, 2011 at 9:43 pm Indeed hence the “broken poetic structure” bit eh? I am an amateur at best with haiku. :p Reply
Nice Mark.
Like an icicle falling
to powdered snow.
A haiku comment! Thanks Dean.
peer pressure
broken poetic structure
simply significant
besides the point^
your words are astonishingly appealing
Heh, this is fun. Not sure it quite counts as renga though. 😉
Indeed hence the “broken poetic structure” bit eh? I am an amateur at best with haiku. :p